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OOC: How is my driving!

  • May. 10th, 2012 at 8:25 PM
yozak-sweetsmile
This is an RP journal for [info]sortinghat_rp. And I know that this journal needs the following post:

How's My Driving?

Tell me what you think of my muse. But I warn you, if it´s wank then I will laugh at you, so don´t try it. This isn´t only a post to give me something over my head (useful/helpful critic) but also to encourage me and to give me new ideas. The main purpose of this post is it to get a good picture of my current playing and what I might do right or wrong.

You can post anonymously or with a sock puppet journal if you wish. Comments are screened. And it doesn´t matter who you are to me. I won´t break up friendships or other relationships because you are criticizing me.

BUT please remember:

a) Be helpful and polite in your critic
b) If you want to bash me because of my language skill; keep in mind that English is my second language. I´m from Germany. ^____^
c) wank = much amusement and laughter at my side.

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  • Aug. 17th, 2009 at 11:46 AM
yozak-turn
I´m glad that school will start soon again.

And Lelouch Lamperouge...... as much as I would like to confess that we need the money I will bring it back with me to school. Please, don´t pity us.


((ooc: Lelouch transfered a huge amount of money to the orphanage account.))

Page 26 I need a time table

  • Jul. 1st, 2009 at 2:32 PM
ok-I`m-your-man
I have finished painting the room, guys!!! *YES!!!* Now, I only need to fix the roof and the garden and I can finally relax.

Okay, not really, but nearly. I have only to worry of classes.
Reborn is still a slave driver. >o<

Anyway! I would like to make a small time table. This is concerning the following people:
Xemnas, Matthew, Shin and Lelouch.

Please tell me when you want to visit me. :) ♥♥♥
pushin-forwards
[A door was slammed shut and there were the squeaking of a bed as somebody fell on it.]

I´m beaten. I will never wake up anymore. On my way home I read that everybody has much fun over there in Paris. Keep it up guys!

[Even when he seemed to be happy for the others a hint of longing was there.]
yozak-sweetsmile
Hello Raivis,

I wanted to ask if you would like to meet up with me.
I thought we should learn a bit more about each other to work against your anxiety in my presence.

We could meet up in London. Maybe going to the park would be fun.

Best regards,
Yozak

Page 24 WHAT THE HECK??????

  • Jun. 22nd, 2009 at 8:14 PM
pushin-forwards
Okay.....somebody hates me. Not that it isn´t enough that I can´t contact Conrad. NO!!!! Now I got a letter that I fail in three classes.

I´m called in for remedial classes.
That means I will be busy until the 07/10. The bad part I will need to try out the theory that the human body needs only four hours of sleep.

At day time I will go to the classes and then I need to run back and finish the other rooms. I´m glad that non of you wanted to visit me that early.

To Shin: I think the janitor job sounds more and more appealing.
sad
I´m somehow......disappointed. I called Conrad´s home today. I wanted to ask if he had time in the summer holidays. I wanted to tell him about Hogwarths and what happened the last year. I was looking forward to it to see him again after nearly of one year only writing to each other.

They told me that he won´t be there in the summer. :(
He didn´t tell me. And we didn´t see us at all the last year. And his letters are rare if I get an answer at all.

.......

I will back to work now.
what-I-did-nothing-dress
My room is cleaned out and ready to get painted tomorrow. The worse part, the ladies used my enthusiasm to redo my room and make me clean out other rooms too, for repainting. I have now five rooms to do.

-_-

But at least they are overjoyed that I finally will get visitor from my school. They were worried that I wouldn´t fit in at all after five years of going to Hogwarth and no visitors in the holidays.

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  • Jun. 18th, 2009 at 7:49 AM
closed-eyes
[private to Shin]

I think the Truth and Dare game was fun and maybe I managed to make new friends outside of our house.
Lelouch is coming over, maybe you can spare some time too, in the summer holidays?

[/private]

[private to Lelouch]
I will send you a map and a traveling plan to my house.
[/private]

Page 21 TO Dr. House

  • Jun. 18th, 2009 at 7:13 AM
wounded
Hey Sir,

could it be possible to get a private appointment with you before we leave for the summer holidays?

~Yozak~

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  • Jun. 1st, 2009 at 10:23 AM
embarrassed
Realizations aren´t the best things sometimes. I really need to adjust my gay radar. Two mistakes in one year and one of it for five years aren´t the best quote.

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  • May. 30th, 2009 at 8:35 AM
worried-spy
It seems that the castle is doing one of its games again.


(ooc: No event for Yozak this time. His mun is ill and can´t be creative at the moment.))

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  • May. 27th, 2009 at 10:04 PM
closed-eyes
......could somebody please come and shoot me? My head is killing me and the rest of my body doesn´t seem to cooperate either.

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  • May. 23rd, 2009 at 12:24 PM
crossed-arms-closed-expression
[A few drops of ink appear on the paper and a few not describable doodles follow.]

.......

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  • May. 18th, 2009 at 12:15 AM
considering-hand-chin
It is like an illness. And that now when I need my magic for once. I could think now that the castle doesn´t want me to study but even I can´t hope for such a generous thinking on its side.

Page 14 *Aftermath*

  • May. 11th, 2009 at 7:19 PM
closed-eyes
Until now I thought I had a screwed up childhood but the last fuck up of the castle topped it all!